Should I change this cover?

My spring portfolio!! oh gosh... I really didn't want to go too overboard with the layout so this is what I came up with. PLEASE tell me what to take out or what to work on. My pen and ink and the BW rendering I know I need to work on (someone have a really good camera??). And I need help with the last page. Oh yeah, the order of the pages are some what in order.