Tuesday, April 17, 2012

Should I change this cover?











My spring portfolio!! oh gosh... I really didn't want to go too overboard with the layout so this is what I came up with. PLEASE tell me what to take out or what to work on. My pen and ink and the BW rendering I know I need to work on (someone have a really good camera??). And I need help with the last page. Oh yeah, the order of the pages are some what in order.

1 comment:

  1. scan your BW rendering and take a picture of your ink in neutral lighting. Really loving your trees but maybe you can make the one on the left a bit bigger.
    For your modeling, fix the alignment of your pictures.The spacing between the pictures are uneven.

    2nd page of figures...figure all the way to the right looks like he's missing his hand.

    your first sketchbook page...is there a reason why you put a bar on each side? cause it's different from the other pages....

    cover....put your Id underneath portfolio review...personally, it feels weird that it's on the right.

    Overall, pretty good :)

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